tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7329817540513850224.post3222257669280378802..comments2023-10-25T04:05:04.377-07:00Comments on Botgirl's Digital Playground: Botgirl's Bookshelf: Digital Ego by Jacob van Kokswi jkBotgirl Questihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01707252228872837054noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7329817540513850224.post-61320505381404412522008-06-02T09:26:00.000-07:002008-06-02T09:26:00.000-07:00If ONLY he had an editor - the meandering is wonde...If ONLY he had an editor - the meandering is wonderful but really - it needed a good tightening up by someone with an eye for helping an author with brilliant ideas express them with a lot more clarity. If I had my copy I'd toss in an example or two...it's such a shame, because it distracts from the pleasures of the content.<BR/><BR/>While the legal section is worth the price of the book, the rest of it I'm not so sure - I didn't find it all that, hmm...coherent. And I'm not sure that the overuse of footnotes to Wikipedia really qualifies as scholarly although you're right - there is some good stuff in there, although I think that if footnotes comprise 1/3rd of the content maybe they should have been appended as a really useful appendix?<BR/><BR/>Having said that, there are some real gems in here, some notions to explore, some side links to commentary on identity, avatar rights, all that good stuff. I just found it a bit tough to wade through, and I'm hardly one for clarity or brevity myself.<BR/><BR/>I know - always better to say something nice or don't say anything at all....but consider it a plea on behalf of editors everywhere - even the greatest ideas can use a bit of sharpening, and if you're going to actually *gasp* put it on paper, it's a useful service to your readers.<BR/><BR/>Hmm. It's Monday. Maybe that's why. Because really, bravo for Digital Ego, it DOES add to our collective knowledge - but if I was going to recommend a MUST READ - not for this month, or this year, but for this decade when it comes to virtual worlds, it would be Coming of Age in Second Life (read it in parallel to Hamlet's book and you're pretty much good to go).Dusan Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08883341195589915156noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7329817540513850224.post-46903563451816693492008-05-30T14:32:00.000-07:002008-05-30T14:32:00.000-07:00Thanks for calling attention to this, BG. I'm addi...Thanks for calling attention to this, BG. I'm adding it to the "must read now" list for my own research on SLegality.Forelle Broekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09196710797779712060noreply@blogger.com